Split second..
I wrote this one a few months back, somehow never posted it. Doesn't really feel upto the mark to some of my others, but oh well, its still my effort :).
A snowflake
On the ground
Melting into a tear-drop;
An ember
In the fireplace
Burning to ashes non-stop;
A raindrop
From a cloud
Falling to its demise;
A sound wave
Part of a thunder
Losing clarity after its rise;
A ray of sunlight
In the west
Fading away to the horizon;
A fallen leaf
On the grass
Oblivious to its destruction;
An insignificant life
On this earth
Well-lived and well-wished;
A moment
Of ticking time
Remembered and relished;
4 Comments:
Soumya retorted...
It is really beautiful. Why the comparison? It expresses a profound thought in a simple, yet captivating manner. Very nice kane.
Rose retorted...
Keep the tweet posts flowing..!
Vanditha retorted...
Extremely good!!
Deeps retorted...
Soum,
Somehow felt it was a bit too cliched :-D.
Rose,
Good to know you like the tweets :-D.
Vandy,
Thanks re :).
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