Beyond Comparison :)
No Comparison
Though you always stand strongly beside me,
I cannot compare you to an enormous tree..
'Cause trees do get uprooted in heavy storms,
They bend, they break and they fall to debris..
Though you protect me with a graceful flair,
I cannot compare you to the all-permeating air..
'Cause even pure air turns dangerous sometimes,
Vicious poisonous gases lurking in its lair..
Though you do follow me no matter where I go.
I cannot compare you to a faithful shadow..
'Cause a shadow too disappears on cloudy days,
Today it is there, but not there tomorrow..
Though you stick with me, thick and thin through,
Be it laughter or tears, be it old or new..
There is nothing I can compare you to, my dear,
'Cause there's simply no comparison to you..
7 Comments:
Harish Suryanarayana retorted...
Aah ! Read it to your hubby when you go out for a candle-light dinner. It will warm his heart :)
Koi Pahailee retorted...
wow
can truly relate to it
Deeps retorted...
>> Harish >>
Sri gets to see all my poems first, so it will be no surprise to him :-D.
>> Koi Pahailee >>
:)). I guess every person in love will feel like this :).
Soumya retorted...
all romantic, uh...very touching one deeps...very true also...
Deeps retorted...
>> Manushyan >>
Yeah, its just similies every place, thats all :-D. I basically had this shadow vanishes on cloudy days idea, so played around with it :).
>> Preethi >>
I am smiling at your quote too :)).
Usha retorted...
He must be a wonderful person to deserve this! Happiness always!!
bhadra retorted...
nice poem - poems are the best to present mind bogglings in a crisp format.
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